literature

Love

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I had no strings to toy with you
body, soul I was your true.
Had me now, but didn't stay
So this is all I wanted to say:

Forget me not, for I will you.
Never again to be with you.
Friendship isn't stronge enough
To stop this death inside of me.

You killed me once, but never again.
This is just something random. I am going throught a tough time right now. My boyfriend that I loved, who said he wanted to marry me, just broke up with me. He was the love of my life but I guess he had second thoughts about what he wanted or something, I don't know. But he told me to get over him so I wrote this poem in hopes that maybe if he knows how I feel he'll change his mind or reconsider what he is truely doing before he loses me forever. on another note the poem does seem incomplete to me but I have no idea what else to put.....I wrote it at like 1 am so at the time it sounded complete! (lol)
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Pussyfoot's avatar
I really liked this piece. You can feel the emotion that you put into this. Excellent job.